trekopep's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Hero Clock]

Great.

This was a really great animation, but there are two things you should fix. First, make it so you can change the quality, and second, add a stopAllSounds(); action to the replay button so that the music doesn't keep playing after you press it. Well, great animation. All of the characters were well drawn, and I hope to see more from you.

[Mario's Last Battle]

Nice.

Okay, I know what the music was from, but I won't say since you're probably already tired of every single person saying: Hey, I know what songs you used! You used... and so on. Not that saying I won't say what songs you used is any quicker, but that's just how I am.

One thing I find funny is that the alternate ending had almost the exact scene I imagined was going to happen while watching the first ending. Both of them were funny, and the first one was expected, and yet extremely unexpected. The animation was very smooth, and this was overall a 4/5 from me. You've got to work a little harder to get a 5, but this was great, and I'd give you somewhere around a 4.25. Well, nice job, and good luck with that contest. ;)

[Clay Fight (FUSION)]

I never was much of a fan of claymation.

This was good quality work, but it was pretty short, like newgroundsluvr said. I could see the strings (or whatever) holding the clay figures up at times, but it didn't matter to me. Also, it took a while to load, so maybe think of decreasing music quality in the future. That usually brings down the filesize by quite a bit. Overall, this was a good claymation. It was just a bit short. That's all for now. Good luck on future projects, and may your clay mold to your desire.

LittleLuckyLink responds:

Yeah I reduced quality on the first song but forgot about the second.. Thanks for the review!

[Redmen Battle]

Hmm.. not bad...

You have a long way to go before you're a professional flash animator, but at the moment you're probably still better than I am. Is this your first animation ever? Or just first one submitted to NG. Either way, it isn't too bad. Good luck on future projects. Also, were you using a frame rate of 12? If so, look in the properties window, and change it to 24 or something. This animation seemed slow, and not a lot of people like slow action. Just a tip. ^^

Arch-Angel responds:

thank you for the tip. this is not my first animation ever, it is , however, my first animation over 15 seconds long, and my first one to NG. accualy that's a frame rate of 14 lol sorry about that, it's just that by the time I realized that it was too slow I was already half-way through the animation, so it was too late to change. the next one's up at 24.

[(:>Faces of Creation<:)]

Blah.

Sorry, but this just didn't do it for me. It was lacking something. It wasn't long enough, but if you had dragged it out longer I would have liked it even less. I wish I could say I loved this, but I didn't. Promise, though. That's what I tell everyone they show. And it isn't stopping at you. You definitely show promise. I myself am not the master at fbf animation either... you can look at "Material" if you want to see for yourself. But keep true to your word. Don't let this be the last fbf animation you do. I know, it's hard. But I'll keep going if you do. Heck, I'll keep going even if you stop making flash forever. But my point is, giving up doesn't get you anywhere. And if you don't give up, you can accomplish almost anything. (keyword: almost) I'm sorry to say that this got a 2/5. But keep trying. ;)

caboos1 responds:

thx im sorry you didn't like it but thx for the speech about me keep trying but its kinda sad iv been making flashes for longer than 3 years... ya im hopeless my flashes still suck. but i guess if you look at my work you can see a very gradual change it slowly gets better and better so i see what you meen but i can barely see my improvement and i don't think i ever will but i will take your advise and and keep practicing and keep working on my stuff.also im getting older and more mature and that reflects onto my work drastically lol just look at my review responses on my older stuff its embarrassingly bad and dumb sounding. PS thx, reviews like this actually do help i see nothing but bad reviews and then there is 1 review that gives me hope and lets me know that they see a little potential in me so in short thank you.

[Castle III part B]

Wow.

That's amazing. Just pure amazing. I'm looking forward to seeing some action in the next one. It seems like you did a better job on the helicopters in this one than in the others. I love all of the detail you put into your work. The suspense is definitely building. You've rounded up quite a few fans with this castle series of yours. ;) I'm also amazed that you've responded to almost every review, even though it may just be a "thanks" or "glad you liked it". From what I've seen, most people stop responding to their reviews after they get on to the front page because there are too many of them. Responding to reviews makes people happy, (or at least it makes me happy) so thanks for responding to all those people. But now I'm definitely off the topic of your flash. Back on topic, your flash was incredibly detailed, and I can't wait for the next one. 5/5, 10/10.

Get-lost responds:

I'm trying to respond to as many as possible to let people know I read their point of view. If they don't have any quesions but say they like it I can't think of anything else to say but thanks :)

And yeah, thanks for this one.

[Future]

MAKE IT STOP!!!

You're making me feel like someone who can't do flash at all! This was the most awesome flash thing I've ever seen! Of course, so were the last 24 flashes I watched, but this one goes STRAIGHT to the VERY TOP of my favorites list. Can you PLEASE give me some hints on flash? The biggest hint is most likely patience, right? That's just one of those things I wish you could buy at a store. Then I could make good flashes! Like yours! I know you probably just made stuff into symbols and tweened and skewed them, but for that to come out like this?! MAN! I could ramble on and on about this flash for, like, twelve pages! But unfortunately, (or fortunately, for you) I can't. But I'm still going to send you five thousand (just an estimate) PMs asking for your autographs and tips. Neon lights+awesome action+awesome music+awesome animator=awesome 300/10 flash! (I would give it 20/10 if I could, but I can't, so I'll have to settle for 10/10.

[Forest of Dreams]

wolfman.

Definately not the best flash I've seen. Work on it. Don't just motion tween things around the screen. It just doesn't look good. I know it's a lot of work, but frame by frame animations usually look 200 times better than this. But you show potential. Also, a side note. I just checked, and you are most definately NOT behind me. And you couldn't have been invisible either. I have invisibility googles. :)

sundaycomics responds:

well when u turned around i was behind you look back behind u. if ur lookin in a mirror im a vampirer

[Demon Slayer's Diary]

Nice.

Watched it 3 times. Really good graphics. It would take me 5 months to make something like that. Good job. :)