trekopep's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Link Gets Hurt AGAIN!!!]

wow...

If you think a flash animation is stupid, review it. Don't make an even crappier animation. If you're going to make a "parody" of something, at least make it good and funny. This, I'm sorry to say, was not.

StagBeetle responds:

I'd love to but I'm review banned!

[Violent life chapter:1]

Don't make slideshows.

Make animations. The world will thank you.

Work on your art a little more, also.

Retrato responds:

Thax for the tip.
I really should go to the Flash totorials some more but i guess it wasent tha bad.
Was it?

[Animation tutorial]

Pretty nice.

You explained everything quite well, and you're a great animator. A lot of people could benefit from this. Keep up the good work.

[The Egg (by lenny)]

Meh...

When you make future animations, you should probably make them longer and have a bit of a story-line. Other than that, you aren't that bad of an animator I suppose.

NedenAnimator responds:

thanx for the review... i do have a longer animation, but im not sure if i shud post it as the credit song isnt made by me. so yehh....
cheers

[Twisted Combat]

Not bad.

I might've liked it better if it was done with actual lines instead of the brush tool, but it was still good. The fbf looked like it took a while to do, (trust me, I know) but it probably could've been longer. I wasn't expecting like three minutes or anything, but it was pretty short. Although there are many short animations out there that I absolutely love. I dunno. Maybe this just wasn't exactly my style. But the animation was decent, and it seems like you put a good amount of time into it, so I'll give you a 7/10 and 4/5. Keep up the good work.

(And yes, every so often I like rooting through the endless animations on NG to find one I like and review it. I know I love it when people find my animations.) ;)

Graeme responds:

i don't like using the lines. not for this kind of animation anyways. the bursh has a more personal feel. and most people use lines for their sticks, makes mine stand out a little i guess.

and yes, the FBF took very bery long in some parts. not a single tween in the movie.

haha. and i usually ask people how they came across one of mine so long after submission. i like it when it happens to. and i guess it shows dedication of somebody can file through them till they find good ones

[Links Breaking in 2]

Could've been better.

It wasn't that funny, and it also wasn't that great of an animation. Try to make your sprites do things more smoothly. Also, your replay button doesn't work. :P

CrispyZero responds:

Noted, noted and noted

[STOP! & Go]

A bit too repetitive.

Try changing it a lot, and not showing the same pictures over and over again, and having a story-line or something.

FattyWhale responds:

Storyline?? You didn't think that SBC driving through the city, getting mad and losing his clock and getting into an accident was a storyline? It's a music video of a song with no lyrics. I think I did fairly well in creating a storyline.

[Flash 0002: Conflict]

A bit more animating would be good...

you basically just tweened the characters around the screen along with their weapons, but it was still alright. The leaf was funny. ^^ Good job.

[Sonic: Nazo Unleashed Part 3]

SPEECHLESS.

I've been waiting for this to come out for quite a time, and was DEFINITELY worth the wait. That was an awesome animation. The story line was good, the fight scenes were awesome, and it was just... well... pretty much perfection.

I loved how you used actual sounds/voices from the actual stuff, and... ahg! Sorry. I just remembered how awesome it was again. Wait, what? Sorry. I'm confusing myself. You've got me speechless! Or speaking gibberish, at least. The graphics were so close to being exactly like Sonic X it isn't even funny. I'm running out of things to say, but I'll probably keep rambling for a while anyway.

I'm not really expecting a sequel, considering how well you summed up the whole thing, (except for the part at the end. 'Kinda left us hangin' there.) but I'd be fine with a sequel. Keep up the amazing work, Chakra. I hope to see more from you soon!

[Everything You Know Is Wrong]

That was great.

The animation flowed really smoothly, but you weren't just motion tweening stuff around the stage without doing anything else either. I love most of the songs by Weird Al, and this is really great. Well, don't know what else to say. Keep up the good work, RWappin!