trekopep's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[MZ's G&W Collab Parts]

Erm.

I'm sorry to say that I can see why you were rejected. But actually, it definately wasn't as bad as it could've been. You actually animated things, rather than some other people who basically make a slideshow. So... it was okay. Not great, but okay.

[LL - Collection]

Wasn't very creative.

I was alright, but it wasn't very funny, or very good, and not much in it was actually animated. Better luck next time. :P

[Brake the Wall!]

Erm.

I didn't quite understand it. The animation wasn't that great, and the characters didn't look that great. Of course, they are stick figures, but they didn't look that great for stick figures. It was alright, but... did you use flash to make this? It didn't seem like it, simply because of how blurry the characters and other things looked. So yeah. You could improve, but you're alright. ;)

Ranck3 responds:

I made this on pivot. And i converted this to .swf so it looks a little blury.

[Dailytoon #500]

Nah.

You need to animate things more, not just tween them around. Also, remove the black around the character pictures. Develop the storyline more, and make the conversations more interesting. Good luck though. ;)

[In Rock 8 Bit]

Could've been a bit better.

It was pretty good, but there could've been a bit more action. But at least there was some action. It was a little too slow for me. I know you were just trying to make the animation fit the song, but still. Nonetheless, it wasn't that bad, although I didn't quite understand the whole storyline. But good job anyways. Keep up the good work.

Injured-Ninja responds:

Yeah, I too think it should have had more action, and more intense. I love your review, it points out what really needs improvements. Thanks!
- Clive

[The fight for glory (2nd)]

Rrrg...

I'm sorry to say that it was... well... painful... to watch through the whole thing. I don't like voting on things before I've seen it all, but... I almost did with this. First of all, it was WAAAAY too slow. Secondly, you didn't animate the things enough. And you should actually draw things, not just take them from places. Sorry. Better luck next time.

[Teh Blog - 2]

Funny.

I like this animation, although I'm not sure whether better or worse than the last. nice job though. You have an interesting view on life. XD It isn't the best animating I've ever seen, but it's good because of the humor and stuff. Keep up the good work.

[We Three Bears]

Wasn't too bad.

At first I almost closed out of the window because I thought it looped, but luckily I didn't. Nice job. Somethings could've been a little more animated than they were. (For example, you could've showed the bears snoring at the end or something.) But other than that, it wasn't too bad. The song was... interesting... to say the least. Keep up the good work.

Maxaroni5 responds:

i am lazy. plus i'm animating like 9 other things right now, i seriously have like 9 flash windows open....

[Madness Streak Ep. 4]

Hmmm...

It was a good madness animation, but the animation didn't seem to go very smoothly for some reason. Also, after a while, the sound effects were off by a lot. I know it's hard to fix, but it did kind of lower the animation quality for me.

[In Jail]

Too short.

The words didn't really sync with the mouthes either. Nice try though.