trekopep's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super mario funny part 2]

Smoother animating.

Mario kind of seemed to teleport everywhere. You need to make it look like he's actually getting there somewhere. Also if you're going to have blood, don't just make a red circle. This wasn't the worst thing I've ever seen on newgrounds, but it needs some improvement nonetheless. I'm not sure what else to say. Keep trying. With luck, you'll get better.

donuts1 responds:

im trying to be butter at flash. thanks for the review!

[do a barel rol]

Loops are bad.

You shouldn't ever make endless short loops like this, especially if they aren't even really interesting. Make an animation that actually has a storyline, or action of some sort. Also, add a preloader.

[CORNBREAD]

What the heck?

Random is the word. The animation was okay, but you need to add quite a few more frames to make it smoother. Also, make it a bit longer, and make the graphics a bit better. The animation didn't sync with the words too well either. Keep trying though. It was kind of funny, and that's something that can boost up your score a bit. ;)

[This and that]

I dunno.

That was actually pretty cool. Really abstract. I liked the music you put to it. It was fitting, in my opinion. The tree part lagged on my computer a bit, but was fine if put on low quality. Although I have a strong feeling this will be blammed, I kinda liked it. Not enough to get more than a 4/10, but it really isn't bad for what it is. Keep it up.

[Super Happy Fun Time 12]

Interesting...

Nothing special. It wasn't too funny, and the animation wasn't that good. I would suggest using real voices, although it could easily ruin the effect. Also, make it have a better story line and be longer. Other than that, it's okay. Keep trying.

SherClockHolmes responds:

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[SuperFist]

Quite amusing, actually.

Better than I thought it was going to be. It was pretty funny, but I'm not quite sure if I liked the voice. I know, you can't really change your voice, but it just didn't go with the animation too well for me. Nice job anyways though.

[Quick Flash Animation 1]

Short.

I liked the animation itself, but it was too short. You're an okay fbf animator, but need some practice. Also, just a heads up, most NGers hate pokémon. But don't let that stop you. Keep trying, and you'll get the hang of it eventually. Just make it longer, and add music and sound effects. :P

[777 - Part 7]

This is great.

I watched the other ones, and they were great too. The storyline is amazing, and the characters were developed extremely well. Is Daisy 666 by any chance? Well, if not, I know she's at least evil in some way. (I can't wait for the next episode!) You're an awesome animator, and I hope to see more from you soon. Keep up the great work.