trekopep's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[We Three Bears]

Wasn't too bad.

At first I almost closed out of the window because I thought it looped, but luckily I didn't. Nice job. Somethings could've been a little more animated than they were. (For example, you could've showed the bears snoring at the end or something.) But other than that, it wasn't too bad. The song was... interesting... to say the least. Keep up the good work.

Maxaroni5 responds:

i am lazy. plus i'm animating like 9 other things right now, i seriously have like 9 flash windows open....

[Link Gets Hurt AGAIN!!!]

wow...

If you think a flash animation is stupid, review it. Don't make an even crappier animation. If you're going to make a "parody" of something, at least make it good and funny. This, I'm sorry to say, was not.

StagBeetle responds:

I'd love to but I'm review banned!

[Violent life chapter:1]

Don't make slideshows.

Make animations. The world will thank you.

Work on your art a little more, also.

Retrato responds:

Thax for the tip.
I really should go to the Flash totorials some more but i guess it wasent tha bad.
Was it?

[The Egg (by lenny)]

Meh...

When you make future animations, you should probably make them longer and have a bit of a story-line. Other than that, you aren't that bad of an animator I suppose.

NedenAnimator responds:

thanx for the review... i do have a longer animation, but im not sure if i shud post it as the credit song isnt made by me. so yehh....
cheers

[Twisted Combat]

Not bad.

I might've liked it better if it was done with actual lines instead of the brush tool, but it was still good. The fbf looked like it took a while to do, (trust me, I know) but it probably could've been longer. I wasn't expecting like three minutes or anything, but it was pretty short. Although there are many short animations out there that I absolutely love. I dunno. Maybe this just wasn't exactly my style. But the animation was decent, and it seems like you put a good amount of time into it, so I'll give you a 7/10 and 4/5. Keep up the good work.

(And yes, every so often I like rooting through the endless animations on NG to find one I like and review it. I know I love it when people find my animations.) ;)

Graeme responds:

i don't like using the lines. not for this kind of animation anyways. the bursh has a more personal feel. and most people use lines for their sticks, makes mine stand out a little i guess.

and yes, the FBF took very bery long in some parts. not a single tween in the movie.

haha. and i usually ask people how they came across one of mine so long after submission. i like it when it happens to. and i guess it shows dedication of somebody can file through them till they find good ones

[Links Breaking in 2]

Could've been better.

It wasn't that funny, and it also wasn't that great of an animation. Try to make your sprites do things more smoothly. Also, your replay button doesn't work. :P

CrispyZero responds:

Noted, noted and noted

[STOP! & Go]

A bit too repetitive.

Try changing it a lot, and not showing the same pictures over and over again, and having a story-line or something.

FattyWhale responds:

Storyline?? You didn't think that SBC driving through the city, getting mad and losing his clock and getting into an accident was a storyline? It's a music video of a song with no lyrics. I think I did fairly well in creating a storyline.

[Clay Fight (FUSION)]

I never was much of a fan of claymation.

This was good quality work, but it was pretty short, like newgroundsluvr said. I could see the strings (or whatever) holding the clay figures up at times, but it didn't matter to me. Also, it took a while to load, so maybe think of decreasing music quality in the future. That usually brings down the filesize by quite a bit. Overall, this was a good claymation. It was just a bit short. That's all for now. Good luck on future projects, and may your clay mold to your desire.

LittleLuckyLink responds:

Yeah I reduced quality on the first song but forgot about the second.. Thanks for the review!

[Redmen Battle]

Hmm.. not bad...

You have a long way to go before you're a professional flash animator, but at the moment you're probably still better than I am. Is this your first animation ever? Or just first one submitted to NG. Either way, it isn't too bad. Good luck on future projects. Also, were you using a frame rate of 12? If so, look in the properties window, and change it to 24 or something. This animation seemed slow, and not a lot of people like slow action. Just a tip. ^^

Arch-Angel responds:

thank you for the tip. this is not my first animation ever, it is , however, my first animation over 15 seconds long, and my first one to NG. accualy that's a frame rate of 14 lol sorry about that, it's just that by the time I realized that it was too slow I was already half-way through the animation, so it was too late to change. the next one's up at 24.

[(:>Faces of Creation<:)]

Blah.

Sorry, but this just didn't do it for me. It was lacking something. It wasn't long enough, but if you had dragged it out longer I would have liked it even less. I wish I could say I loved this, but I didn't. Promise, though. That's what I tell everyone they show. And it isn't stopping at you. You definitely show promise. I myself am not the master at fbf animation either... you can look at "Material" if you want to see for yourself. But keep true to your word. Don't let this be the last fbf animation you do. I know, it's hard. But I'll keep going if you do. Heck, I'll keep going even if you stop making flash forever. But my point is, giving up doesn't get you anywhere. And if you don't give up, you can accomplish almost anything. (keyword: almost) I'm sorry to say that this got a 2/5. But keep trying. ;)

caboos1 responds:

thx im sorry you didn't like it but thx for the speech about me keep trying but its kinda sad iv been making flashes for longer than 3 years... ya im hopeless my flashes still suck. but i guess if you look at my work you can see a very gradual change it slowly gets better and better so i see what you meen but i can barely see my improvement and i don't think i ever will but i will take your advise and and keep practicing and keep working on my stuff.also im getting older and more mature and that reflects onto my work drastically lol just look at my review responses on my older stuff its embarrassingly bad and dumb sounding. PS thx, reviews like this actually do help i see nothing but bad reviews and then there is 1 review that gives me hope and lets me know that they see a little potential in me so in short thank you.