trekopep's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[cupcake...]

Odd.

That wasn't too bad. It was kind of weird though. The talking didn't completely go with the text, but that's alright. I really don't know what else to say about this animation. It was a bit short, but seemed a bit too long for what it was.

Try adding some background, or maybe adding a bit more detail to the characters. Overall, I think it was okay, but not great. I dunno. Keep trying. Maybe it just isn't my style. :P

oldlyshapedchris responds:

ok
alot of peaople liked it so i guess its your stye!!

[Sonic charas sing for you]

It's not too bad.

You drew the characters well. I like the song, and the ending gave me a little laugh. Change the music to streaming if it's on event. Then it should go with the animation. Hope I helped. :)

kalmathehedgehog responds:

Ok I did what you said, but then the music stopped at the second scene. Is there a way to fix that too? xD

[Fightage]

Well, since you asked...

This was pretty good. You might've wanted to make the peoples' movements a bit smoother, but drawing smooth frame-by-frame is hard and time consuming, so I'll let it go.

Anyways, it was a cool battle with good animation and cool sound effects, and the ending was funny. You might want to make it a bit longer, and try to make the movement smoother, but other than that, it was good.

Keep it up.

BMack24 responds:

i hope to address all those concerns in the next one. thanks for your review, always good to get a fellow artist's opinion.

[NightAtRocksberry -al3xx-]

Not too great.

The talking was really bad. It was extremely difficult to understand what they were saying. Improve that, and your animation will be a lot better. Also, add a background, increase the frame rate, make the graphics a bit better (add shading, lighting, more detail, etc.), and animate things a bit more. Nice job anyways though. ;)

al3xx responds:

wuuuhh, thanks ^^'

[Super mario funny part 2]

Smoother animating.

Mario kind of seemed to teleport everywhere. You need to make it look like he's actually getting there somewhere. Also if you're going to have blood, don't just make a red circle. This wasn't the worst thing I've ever seen on newgrounds, but it needs some improvement nonetheless. I'm not sure what else to say. Keep trying. With luck, you'll get better.

donuts1 responds:

im trying to be butter at flash. thanks for the review!

[Super Happy Fun Time 12]

Interesting...

Nothing special. It wasn't too funny, and the animation wasn't that good. I would suggest using real voices, although it could easily ruin the effect. Also, make it have a better story line and be longer. Other than that, it's okay. Keep trying.

SherClockHolmes responds:

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[Brake the Wall!]

Erm.

I didn't quite understand it. The animation wasn't that great, and the characters didn't look that great. Of course, they are stick figures, but they didn't look that great for stick figures. It was alright, but... did you use flash to make this? It didn't seem like it, simply because of how blurry the characters and other things looked. So yeah. You could improve, but you're alright. ;)

Ranck3 responds:

I made this on pivot. And i converted this to .swf so it looks a little blury.

[In Rock 8 Bit]

Could've been a bit better.

It was pretty good, but there could've been a bit more action. But at least there was some action. It was a little too slow for me. I know you were just trying to make the animation fit the song, but still. Nonetheless, it wasn't that bad, although I didn't quite understand the whole storyline. But good job anyways. Keep up the good work.

Injured-Ninja responds:

Yeah, I too think it should have had more action, and more intense. I love your review, it points out what really needs improvements. Thanks!
- Clive