At least you edited it.
If all you had done was put the two songs together without tweaking it even the slightest bit, it probably would have sounded even worse. Not your best, but not your worst. You're really good at making music. You should definately go pro, like someone else (who DEFINATELY wasn't you just using your brother's account) told you. ;) Unfortunately, I don't use instant messanger. But I DO have an E-Mail account. It's trekopepinator@yahoo.com. E-Mail me piz! (typo alert! When I said it WOULD be on NG soon, I mean't WOULDN'T be on soon. lol.) Well, I have to go now. Good luck on making your songs!